Today my row critiqued my persona, along with both design professors. Overall, it went pretty well. A lot of small things were picked out, like edge tension, alignment, & wording. One of the comments I found most insightful was switching the colors on my graph, emphasizing lighter colors of the darker & creating better balance. My professors commented on combining the biography & interactions section into just the bio, then creating a new section about how my persona interacted with the site specifically and maybe a few additional secondary aspects, such as what she does in her free time & her comfort with technology. Also, on the graph, differentiating the online sources to break up the graph more.
During the remaining time in class I worked on applying these changes to my persona.
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